I have written a novel about the Marine Security Guard Det and the takeover of the US embassy in New Delhi in the near future. Several of the chapters take place aboard the USS Reagan, and one is in a F-22 Raptor. And I feel these chapters are quite weak. I just don't have the background to feel confident in writing them. So I would really appreciate it if someone could take a look at them and let me know some better terminology or ships characterstics to give this better verismilitude.
Any, any help would be appreciated.
The chapters in question are 31, 37, 41, and 50.
They can be found on my personal website http://www.thefewthebook.com/ . This is not a commercial website--nothing is for sale there!
Anyone else who wants to comment on any aspect of the novel is also very welcome.
Thanks!
Any, any help would be appreciated.
The chapters in question are 31, 37, 41, and 50.
They can be found on my personal website http://www.thefewthebook.com/ . This is not a commercial website--nothing is for sale there!
Anyone else who wants to comment on any aspect of the novel is also very welcome.
Thanks!