ghost457
Active member
i actually wrote this poem for English class, what do you guys think?
Teardrops
Booming
Thundering
Crying
I can taste my fear
the whizz of Death past my ear
a scream, a shout, a plea close by
I feel the sadness as God begins to cry
I feel the teardrop touch my heart
the feelings I wish I could impart
as the teardrops fall, I fight
for the life of my own
for the love I have known
for the things I have done
all for the tears of the Sun
Teardrops
Booming
Thundering
Crying
I can taste my fear
the whizz of Death past my ear
a scream, a shout, a plea close by
I feel the sadness as God begins to cry
I feel the teardrop touch my heart
the feelings I wish I could impart
as the teardrops fall, I fight
for the life of my own
for the love I have known
for the things I have done
all for the tears of the Sun