The Importance of Correct Punctuation!

Naddoður

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I had long wanted to write a love letter to my girlfriend in England.

This was the words that I had in my head

Dear Linda:
I want a girl who knows what love is all about. You are generous, kind, thoughtful. People who are not like you admit to being useless and inferior. You have ruined me for other girls. I yearn for you. I have no feelings whatsoever when we're apart. I can be forever happy--will you let me be yours?
Christian

Since English is not my first language and as I did not quite manage English grammar; this is how the letter came out.

Dear Linda:
I want a girl who knows what love is. All about you are generous, kind, thoughtful people, who are not like you. Admit to being useless and inferior. You have ruined me. For other girls, I yearn. For you, I have no feelings whatsoever. When we're apart, I can be forever happy. Will you let me be?
Yours,
Christian


PS. She’s no longer my girlfriend.
 
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