Airsoft Team Video




 
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January 3rd, 2006  
FO Seaman
 
 

Topic: Airsoft Team Video


This is a video made by me for our airsoft team. Our name is the 3rd JOF (Joint Operation Force). Tell me what you guys think, it's sort of to help us recruit members.

www.yashi.com/?video&vid=228335

NSFW, don't play with volume up.
January 3rd, 2006  
Morten
 
 
hmm... a few critz... if u dont mind?

dont show too many pictures of the army instead of ur team... this is NOT about joining the army, this is about joining the softball team

a little more action would be nice... instead of taking pictures, record some video...

why do we see pictures of ur house? :S is this a personal video? or a softball commercial? :P

EDIT: hehe anyways... thx for sharing keep improving dude i'm sure the next vid (if u make one) will be TWICE as good...
January 3rd, 2006  
FO Seaman
 
 
Quote:
Originally Posted by Morten
hmm... a few critz... if u dont mind?

dont show too many pictures of the army instead of ur team... this is NOT about joining the army, this is about joining the softball team

a little more action would be nice... instead of taking pictures, record some video...

why do we see pictures of ur house? :S is this a personal video? or a softball commercial? :P
It's more of a work in progress, I put it on here to get feedback.

1.) Ok, do use too many pics of the military, gotcha.

2.) More action, use video. Will do.

3.) Thats not my home you see, thats some neigborhood nearby. I'll try and get less pics of homes, lol.
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January 3rd, 2006  
Morten
 
 
Quote:
Originally Posted by Cadet Seaman
It's more of a work in progress, I put it on here to get feedback.

1.) Ok, do use too many pics of the military, gotcha.

2.) More action, use video. Will do.

3.) Thats not my home you see, thats some neigborhood nearby. I'll try and get less pics of homes, lol.
hehe ok

its just that all the other "random" pics kinda confuse the message... :S i didn't know it was a Softball club if u hadn't told me hehe...
January 3rd, 2006  
FO Seaman
 
 
Quote:
Originally Posted by Morten
hehe ok

its just that all the other "random" pics kinda confuse the message... :S i didn't know it was a Softball club if u hadn't told me hehe...
U mean airsoft?
January 3rd, 2006  
Morten
 
 
Quote:
Originally Posted by Cadet Seaman
U mean airsoft?
sure... u know what i mean... lol