| Terry, I do believe buried within the forum is a thread which I started to share writings and other artistic creations- while this is excellent prose, may I suggest we use an umbrella thread?
That aside, like I said- the prose is wonderful. It (to me, I am no veteran) accurately depicts the confusion and inevitable little breakdowns on a battlefield. I could do well by taking a few pages out of your book (figuratively speaking, of course).
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