deerslayer

Here's the plot for a novel I'm working on:

Two disaffected and discharged soldiers back from Chechnya grow increasingly disenchanted with the failing Russian government, and seek to overthrow it.
Through the sale of narcotics, they scrape together over a couple of years the funds to appropriate a revolution during prime time- a German re-election and military movement.
An assassin is contacted with plans to carry out a hit on a high ranking German official and set up the Russians for the hit. However, the leader of this little coup is imprisoned for his activities.
Meanwhile, the Germans, sporting a PM with a previously unknown neo-Nazi-agenda, are remilitarizing for the purpose of reclaiming lands lost east of the Rhine.

In the middle of this, the U.S. is trying to get to the bottom of the German remilitarization as tensions mount between Germany and Russia, and ultimately a detatchment of US SFOD-D operators and Russian Spetznas working in unison get caught up in the race to uncover the German conspiracy. From there, things go pretty far south, not saying anything more.

Does this sound any good to anyone here, out of curiosity? I have about 300 pages written so far, just wanted to get some input from the military-oriented community. If you like the brotherhood-of-arms mixeed with a high emphasis on devotion and honor, you'd probably enjoy this.